Here's my interpretation of the theme from Pokemon Platinum when you battle Cyrus, it is my first remix EVER! Please let me know in an honest manner what i can do to improve it and let me know what you think, no harsh comments please, its my first remix ever so yaknow lol. Enjoy :D

While there are other things I can critique, here's the biggest thing I have to say:

You have to change the song up! The whoe song is driven by the same damn bass and drumline, which is exactly the same throughout the song and gets very monotonous. And so, the song blends together in one pile of Buh-dun-dikida Buh-dun-dikita. If you want to keep interest in the listener, you have to give them reasons to stay interested! You can change up song texture, keys, instruments, rhythms, harmonies, time feel - any number of things!

Wow, when i first saw this comment over a year ago, i thought it was a bit mean.... now i'm a bit less naive, i've realised how nice you were being... yeah this song is terrible haha