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quetz - NuN's Chaostry - New Hope

NewSongBot · November 21, 2009 at 14:46 UTC

NuN's Chaostry - New Hope
quetz has posted a new song. Please provide the artist some feedback in this thread.

NuN's Chaostry - New Hope
Release date: 2009-11-21
Length: 3:15
Status: original song
Version: 1
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This is a mix of some classical infuences and new wave of electronic music. According to the description of this combat, I felt that some avandgarde style would be very nice. Made something I can call original and unique. Enjoy!

Solid, but needs a strong melody

Muuurgh · December 06, 2009 at 22:22 UTC

Hey quetz,


     I'll start off by saying that as a whole, I like a lot of the elements in your piece.  I feel like there is good detailing in it, as shown by elements such as the panning and sound choice.  I also like the rhythmic focus and think there are some really nice spots that show off your abilities in that type of writing.


     However, I personally don't necessarily think that this is a good piece for the competition.  First, when writing a theme for a game, I think that one of the most important aspects is a focus on melody and giving the gamer something that they will remember and want to sing after they hear it.  Where I hear your piece fitting is in the background of some introductory narration or something of the sort because, while I think it's a good piece, even now I can't really remember how it goes.  There are certainly ASPECTS of it that I do remember, but there's no real something out front that forms, shall we say, a cohesion that solidifies the piece in my mind... really, I guess I'm just saying that the lack of a main melody makes it not work for me in this situation.


     Anyway, I hope you find this helpful.  Good luck!